Wednesday, 9 February 2011

Between us, the steam
of your coffee and my tea.
And all the reasons
I braved the rain running down
this café’s sweaty windows.


Jacquelyn Deighton
ok, so i'm the dragon


Danny Earl Simmons said...

Outstanding poem! So much there.

Gillena Cox said...

lots going on there; much love...

Monika said...

I like this one !

Alan Summers said...

If it's not a tanka, it's good enough to be called one anyway.

Marvellous diction, highly atmospheric, you place the reader right there.

A perfect poem (and a tanka, even if you didn't mean to write one).

Alan’s Area 17 blog

Afthi said...

Superb writing