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Outstanding poem! So much there.
lots going on there; much love...
I like this one !
If it's not a tanka, it's good enough to be called one anyway.Marvellous diction, highly atmospheric, you place the reader right there.A perfect poem (and a tanka, even if you didn't mean to write one).AlanAlan’s Area 17 blog.
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