Wednesday, 24 February 2010

Senryu Times Two: No Beer For You

my love means High Life
and a note on the doorstep
"Mexico. Good luck."

after last week's fight
I could head south and leave you
with two kids, no beer


Crazy Coppertop
Crazy Coppertop


Nina said...

I like this, it's got guts.

jem said...

A great tone and atmosphere in these. The personality of the characters shines through.

Enri Zoltz said...

I love how Windi unfences this stark landscape that creeps along the shoulder of human interaction. I'm a fan. Small stones rule.

Diana Murray said...

Ha ha! Great. Perfect last two words.

Robin said...

Well done! You captured the frustration of a moment...and with a bit of humor included.