Sunday, 28 September 2008

Waist high in the grassy field, three deer lift their heads as the train passes. Five minutes down the line, another deer runs alongside the train.

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Juliet Wilson
Crafty Green Poet

4 comments:

Rethabile said...

Nice, Juliet. I can see them.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks for commenting, Rethabile

...deb said...

Oh, Juliet. I am watching it unfold. Nice.

christine said...

Beautiful image of the deer. I felt as if I were on that train, watching the scenes, but also I was in the mind of the deer. You communicate a lot in a few lines.