Sunday, 28 September 2008

Waist high in the grassy field, three deer lift their heads as the train passes. Five minutes down the line, another deer runs alongside the train.


Juliet Wilson
Crafty Green Poet


Rethabile said...

Nice, Juliet. I can see them.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks for commenting, Rethabile

...deb said...

Oh, Juliet. I am watching it unfold. Nice.

christine said...

Beautiful image of the deer. I felt as if I were on that train, watching the scenes, but also I was in the mind of the deer. You communicate a lot in a few lines.