Saturday, 4 December 2010

FORGOTTEN THINGS

the smell
_____of cigarette smoke
and
_____ the inside
_____ of your legs—

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Phil Lane

4 comments:

Paul Smith said...

Beautifully written Phil. It unfolds at just the right pace...

Melissa said...

Ah! This is -tremendous- and sent shivers down my spine.

Strangermusic said...

Melissa: That is by far the best comment I've ever gotten on something I've written. Thank you so much!

Carolyn said...

this is awesome