Saturday, 2 October 2010

3 floors
above
the alley
where
2 young
men
examine
1 paycheck
a window
box
of
geraniums
and
a gray
satellite
dish
and--
what made
me look--
wind
chimes
ringing
out

*

d. f. tweney

1 comment:

juca2 said...

Great 'cascading' piece. Like the number sequence at the beginning and then 'gray' after geraniums. Works very well.