Monday, 7 June 2010

Windsurf

Hand held wind
Splash lapping
Stand, wind across your ears

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Jon Forceton

4 comments:

Jon said...

Hello everyone. The title of this stone is 'Windsurf'. I have a collection of poems about wind and water. Two poems were just included in Karen Kelsey Davies Victorian Violet Press' Summer Journal this week.
http://www.victorianvioletpress.com/thevioletpress/issue3forceton.html

Fiona Robyn said...

Thanks Jon - I've just added the title for you - apologies that it wasn't there to start with.

Jon said...

Thanks Fiona

This one needed a title.

It had the feeling of a frame without the picture.

Anonymous said...

I like this poem and your use of alliteration.