Friday, 9 April 2010

husband-silent house
mousetrap snaps in the empty
it lands upside-down

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Angie Werren
"woman, ask the question"

6 comments:

Red Bird said...

"husband-silent house"

ah, i know this... :)
love.

Dianne said...

upside down,
that can sound like a much larger SNAP than a mouse, in the quiet.

angie said...

thank you, regina & dianne!

it is a much louder sound than you'd think, isn't it? especially when there's no one there to carry it away!

James said...

I like this a lot. The sound of an unwanted chore.

angie said...

thanks, James.

(thank goodness for the neighbor-boy!)

lucychili said...

m yes
quiet
tension