Friday, 4 December 2009

he fidgets in his ill-fitted suit
thrust in the midst of
bereavement

he hopes no one notices his shoes

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Angie Werren
woman, ask the question

5 comments:

Red Bird said...

Aw, poignant, Angie... a powerful image.
x

Ron Eklof said...

Well done

mark said...

Well done!

Jasmine said...

Eyes would be too misty to notice. I like this :)

James Brush said...

Very nice. I love how "fidgets" and "fitted" sound together.