Monday, 21 September 2009

haa haa haa haa
I should have looked -
an old dog panting?


Mat Cross
Glass Onion


Keith Wilson said...

I wonder if the haas are the sound of laughing, or of panting?

alotus-poetry said...

At first, I thought this was the sound of laughing, but realized that this is very true of dogs that are panting. Great observation! Never thought I'd see this in a poem. :) You captured it well.