Tuesday, 25 August 2009

summer rain

hypnotic drips sizzle
on a backyard grill;
squawking grackles
sulk through wet grass

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Angie Werren
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6 comments:

Regina said...

Oh, I can just hear and see those grackles!
Well done, Angie!
:)

Mark said...

Yet again...your work with words is amazing.

it's a luscious mix of words and tricks said...

Thank you so much, I love your site.

If you get a moment, feel free to check out mine. http://letscallthistruth.blogspot.com/

And thank you. You're brilliant.

alotus-poetry said...

That's a lot of snap, pop, and crackle sounds in this one! Love it! :)

James said...

I love the sounds of the grill and the squawks of the grackles. Nice.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

The word "sulk" really makes this, for me. :)