a handful of stones

Thursday, 25 June 2009

The heavy thunder dissolved
Into the rumble
of a passing truck

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Mark Stratton
Radio Nowhere

Luigi said...: I like this.; 25 June 2009 08:43
Beth NoLastName said...: Awesome!; 25 June 2009 13:34
angie said...: wonderful!

I love the word "dissolved."; 25 June 2009 15:36
Red Bird said...: I can so hear this!
Well done, Mark!
:); 26 June 2009 02:11
AmbiguityLotus said...: Rich sounds of music we all can hear. Lovely piece.

http://alotus-poetry.livejournal.com; 26 June 2009 04:15
strattonm said...: Thank you all for all the wonderful comments. Warms my heart, it does.; 26 June 2009 04:58
Gareth said...: Brilliant little piece!; 27 June 2009 19:18
jem said...: I like the way this could work the other way too, the truck could become the thunder become the truck and ever on. Well done.; 22 July 2009 12:26