Thursday, 25 June 2009

The heavy thunder dissolved
Into the rumble
of a passing truck

*

Mark Stratton
Radio Nowhere

8 comments:

Luigi said...

I like this.

Beth NoLastName said...

Awesome!

angie said...

wonderful!

I love the word "dissolved."

Red Bird said...

I can so hear this!
Well done, Mark!
:)

AmbiguityLotus said...

Rich sounds of music we all can hear. Lovely piece.


http://alotus-poetry.livejournal.com

strattonm said...

Thank you all for all the wonderful comments. Warms my heart, it does.

Gareth said...

Brilliant little piece!

jem said...

I like the way this could work the other way too, the truck could become the thunder become the truck and ever on. Well done.