Sunday, 21 June 2009

he slithers his bicycle-tire body so fast
daylilies shake like a storm is coming


(for mice hiding under floorboards, there is)

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Angie Werren
the space between words

4 comments:

strattonm said...

Ugh! Snakes!

Wonderful observation and so well written.

Red Bird said...

Good one, Angie!
:)

AmbiguityLotus said...

Wow. Vivid image that really GRABS at you!! Watch out for that "snake"! I love this. :)

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Pearl said...

what interesting plays of sounds and perspectives. thanks for that.