Thursday, 4 June 2009

after the rain -
slugs suckling in
musty darkness

*

David Loffman
Conjuring Sunlight

3 comments:

Atomist said...

They almost sound cute: the power of poetry; re-branding the slug. Lovely language. Greg.

angie said...

I have never thought of slugs poetically...you make them almost palatable!

jem said...

I like the sound of the words you've chosen, they emphasize the sluginess of the piece.