Saturday, 2 May 2009

the brittle pop of floorboards
as my mother slips downstairs
for some ice water at midnight

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Isabela Oliveira
beautyisinthedark

3 comments:

annie clarkson said...

I really like this, it captures a lovely moment

Red Bird said...

Yes, I hear that pop! So reminiscent! Well done!
:)

jem said...

I like the way you hear her rather than see her.