Saturday, 17 January 2009

i wake up
to find the night
pressing down
on my skin,
time ticks by
like a needle
at the end
of a record
when there's
no one left
in the room

*

amanda oaks
verve bath press

5 comments:

amanda said...

thank you :)

Gordon Mason said...

I'd forgotten about the needle clicking at the end of a record. Brilliant!

CLAY said...

Always at the very end. Splendid.

Ever Yours,
Clayrn Darrow
M.IV

jem said...

Very atmospheric. I haven't heard that end of record sound for many many years, but I can remember it, and suddenly I'm in the scene you've set. Well done.

William Soule said...

Great job setting up this scene. Brooding and atmospheric. Nice!