Wednesday, 31 December 2008

hand-knit drystone walls,
land enriched with seaweed stitch –
feel the warmth

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Susan Richardson
Susan's Journal of Literary Things

9 comments:

Gordon Mason said...

hand-knit is so appropriate!

Crafty Green Poet said...

I liek the seaweed stitch... lovely description...

Ken Wagner said...

The final line nicely sums the layers of textured meaning slowly developed in the poem.

Nicely done.

fourwindshaiga said...

Put together nicely! I do feel the warmth.

Michelle said...

"hand-knit drystone walls" and "seaweed stitch" ... wonderful, Susan!

Susan Richardson said...

Thanks so much for the feedback everyone!

jem said...

I love that middle line - such rhyme and rhythm - I think I might be saying this over and over all day!

Susan Richardson said...

Thank you, Jem.

sbo said...

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