celebrating the extraordinary in the ordinary - the official small stone e-zine
hand-knit is so appropriate!
I liek the seaweed stitch... lovely description...
The final line nicely sums the layers of textured meaning slowly developed in the poem. Nicely done.
Put together nicely! I do feel the warmth.
"hand-knit drystone walls" and "seaweed stitch" ... wonderful, Susan!
Thanks so much for the feedback everyone!
I love that middle line - such rhyme and rhythm - I think I might be saying this over and over all day!
Thank you, Jem.
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