Tuesday, 11 November 2008

a gust of wind scattering rooks over the hospital


Matt Morden
Morden Haiku



To Ms. Fiona Robin

I read the first paragraph of your novel. The use of present tense narration gives a feel of immediacy and works like a useful sail attached with a boat. I wish your boat, The Letter, would sail touching far and far shores of satisfaction for the writer in you.

Whenever you get time, do visit my blogs for short stories and paintings. You would like it.

Naval Langa

Gordon Mason said...

oh I can envisage the power of the wind there.

Fiona Robyn said...

Thank you Naval.
Thanks for dropping by, Gordon.